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OMG! The tension is everything! There's the sexual tension and the plot tension. I love that you keep ramping it up. And since we also get Keaton's POV, it's easy to see what he's feeling and how these two are a good match, even though they can't see it yet. Such good writing! I'm always happy when the next installment arrives!

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Haha yay thank you! I, uh... may have only just begun ramping it up (evil cackle)

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